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Some experts believe it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

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 certain number of experts disagree with starting to learn an exterior
language
 only at secondary
school
 , they claim that it would be better if they begin it at grade
school
. In
this
 essay, I will pay attention to both advantages and disadvantages of
this
 statement, and compare them to find out which of them outweighs another one. On the one hand , it is obvious that learning other
languages
 earlier gets
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plenty number of advantages.
Firstly
, being bilingual,
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can easily use two or more
languages
,
improves
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 your intellectual ability .
Then
 during secondary
school
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 you can use your intellect and non-native
language
 to study other subjects. Another advantage is being competitive
in
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international
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an international
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 scale.
For instance
, English is an international
language
 and without
it
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 nobody can’t win Olympiad in case of knowledge,
therefore
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primary
school
 is a perfect variant
to begin
 learning other
languages
. But,
on the other hand
,
such
 requirements during primary
school
 can cause
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significant problems. One clear disadvantage is retiring curriculum, which contains studying a non-native
language
, will become very complex
to
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 youngsters in primary
school
, because they are only kids who recently started to learn their own alphabet.
Secondly
,
this
 method, which enforces students of elementary
school
 to learn foreign
languages
 , creates weak users of their own
language
 ,
furthermore
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 nobody can ensure an excellent achievement in their learnt foreign
language
. In conclusion, I believe that during grade
school
 it is important to learn own
language
 and a base of science
instead
 of a non-native
language
 and I claim that the advantages of
this
 statement outweigh the disadvantages.
Submitted by Deadline 8th April IELTS on

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