IN BRITAIN, WHEN SOME ONE GETS OLD THEY OFTEN FO TO LIVE WITH OTHER OLDER PEOPLE WHERE THERE ARE NURSES TO LOOK AFTER THEM. SOMETIMES, GOVERNMENT HAS TO PAY FOR THEIR STAY. WHO DO YOU THINK SHOULD PAY FOR THIS CARE , GOVERNMENT OR FAMILY?
TODAY'S
LIFE
HAS BECOME FAST WHERE NO ONE HAS TIME FOR THEIR FAMILY TO SPEND. Use synonyms
THEREFORE
, A MYRIAD OF OLDER GENERATIONS PREFERRED TO LIVE THE REST OF THEIR Linking Words
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WITH Use synonyms
THE
FOLK WHO ARE OF THE SAME maturity AND THAT PLACE IS CALLED AN old age HOME. THERE THEY HAVE THE HEALTH WORKERS WHO TAKE Correct article usage
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CARE
OF THEM. Use synonyms
THIS
ESSAY WOULD DISCUSS WHY GOVERNMENT SHOULD SUPPORT THEM FOR Linking Words
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CARE
ESPECIALLY MEDICALLY ILL OLD AGE INDIVIDUALS AND WHY NOT THE FAMILY.
WHEN A FAMILY SUPPORTS THE OLDER FAMILY MEMBER WHEN THEY STAY WITH OTHER SAME-youth FOLK, THE FAMILY PERHAPS FAILS FINANCIALLY TO BALANCE THE EQUAL ATTENTION IN BETWEEN CHILDREN AND PARENTS. Use synonyms
THIS
WOULD END UP RUINING EVERYONE'S LIVELIHOOD. Linking Words
FOR INSTANCE
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ACCORDING TO
THE OLD AGE HOMES SURVEY, 70% OF THE OLDER FOLK'S FAMILIES FACE FINANCIAL IMBALANCE AS THEY HAVE TO SPEND MORE AMOUNT OF CURRENCY TO TAKE Linking Words
CARE
OF THEIR PARENTS THE CAREGIVERS.
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IN CONTRAST
, IF THE REGIME SUPPORTS THOSE PEOPLE, THEY DO NOT HAVE TO WORRY ABOUT THEIR FAMILY'S SITUATION AND THEY CAN STAY HAPPY AND WORRIED FREE. Linking Words
THIS
WOULD HELP THEM TO RECOVER FAST AND MAKE THE Linking Words
LAST
DAYS MEMORABLE. Linking Words
HOWEVER
, Linking Words
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PERHAPS INCREASE THE BURDEN ON THE NATIONAL HEALTH Linking Words
CARE
SYSTEM. Use synonyms
FOR EXAMPLE
, AS PER THE USA HEALTH Linking Words
CARE
SYSTEM REPORT, 80% OF INDIVIDUALS WHO ARE AT THE Use synonyms
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OF 70 LIVE JOYFUL Use synonyms
LIFE
WITH OTHER SAME-AGEAGE FRIENDS WITHOUT WORRYING ABOUT THEIR CHILDREN. Use synonyms
NEVERTHELESS
, GOVERNMENT SHOULD PROVIDE OLDER FOLKS PENSIONSPENSIONS AFTER RETIREMENT FROM THEIR JOB AND Linking Words
ALSO
THEIR CHILDREN SHOULD SUPPORT BY FUNDING FOR THEIR PARENTS.
IN CONCLUSION, AFTER THE ABOVE DISCUSSION I FIND THAT IF THE AUTHORITY SPONSOR THE Linking Words
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FARE Use synonyms
THEN
FAMILIES COULD BE ABLE TO SAVE MONEY THAT COULD ASSIST IN BUILDING THE JUVENILES Linking Words
FURTHER
LIVELIHOODS. AS NOT ALL THE FAMILIES ARE CAPABLE TO TAKE responsibility OF THE OLDER FAMILY MEMBER.Linking Words
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