Some people think the government should subsidise fruit and vegetables to make healthy food more affordable. Others argue that the government should tax unhealthy food instead. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Health issues arising from consuming excessive amounts of junk food are a cause of great concern in many countries. There are calls for governments to either reduce the prices of healthy eatables through subsidies or raise the costs of unhealthy products through taxation. In my opinion, a combination of the two is the best way forward.
On the one hand, I agree that the levy option can help to reduce the consumption of potentially harmful foods.
For example
, the so-called "sugar tax" imposed in the UK on soft drinks with a high sugar content has had some positive effects. Soft drink manufacturers,Linking Words
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strategy of passing on price reductions directly to the consumer seems to have a greater impact on eating habits, and I see it as an important step towards encouraging people to eat better. Of course, one drawback is that persuading governments to spend money, rather than collect it through taxation, is no simple matter.
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To conclude
, I believe that the best way forward is to employ both strategies in tandem. Imposing a tax on unhealthy foods and drinks can discourage people from buying them, and the money raised can Linking Words
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