A lot of people have become dependent on technology as it plays a big role in our daily lives. Do you agree that living in a computer age has more advantages than disadvantages? Describe the positive and negative impacts of technology on our lives and give your opinion.
In
this
20th century,technonolgy
is Correct your spelling
technology
the
part of our daily life and Change the article
apply
computer
is the main revolutionary invention.In my opinion Change the article
the computer
computers
advantages outweigh the disadvantages.Change noun form
computers'
computer's
Technology
makes our life easy and comfortable though crime
and Correct article usage
the crime
war
ratio increase enormously.
To began
with,Change the form of the verb
begin
technology
makes our life style
far better compared to previousCorrect your spelling
lifestyle
dacades
.To be precise,with the Correct your spelling
decades
discover
of Replace the word
discovery
computers
individuals do every possible Add a comma
,computers
things
,which Change to a singular noun
thing
aid
us to create a brighter future.To illustrate Correct subject-verb agreement
aids
this
Change the determiner
this computer
these computers
computers
has
all sorts of function peoples Correct subject-verb agreement
have
has
to command the Correct subject-verb agreement
have
computers
and they do their work within minutes ,whereas
folk have to spend years for a soluation
.Correct your spelling
solution
Apart from
this
,we upgraded our communication and transportation system ,which allow
us to do Correct subject-verb agreement
allows
unimmaginable
Correct your spelling
unimaginable
things
.For instance
,now we can go to space to find new habitate
for our future.NASA sent a spaceship to Mars to find out the environment of Correct your spelling
habits
this
planet.
On the other hand
,technology
brings some unnecessary things
to us like war
,pollution and crime.In other words
, since 1950 the industrial revolution begin
,Change the verb form
begins
thus
increasing the emission of carbon dioxide .Therefore
we suffer from various environmental issues.Moreover
,war
is another problem,which is a great concern for all countries.When a war
is start thousands of innocent people die without any reason.For example
,in the 2nd world war
millions of people died and America was attacked by nuclear
Add an article
a nuclear
weapon
,which is a great invention of science,more than 5o thousand Japanese people died.
In conclusion, Fix the agreement mistake
weapons
the
Correct article usage
apply
technology
always brings good things
and develops our lifestyle,although
some inventions create noise things
but
we can mitigate these Remove the conjunction
apply
things
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