The chart below shows the number of trips made by children in one country in 1990 and 2010 to travel to and from school using different modes of transport.
The given bar chart gives information about which means of transportation young kids used to common to and from
school
in two different years: 1990 and 2010.
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building was more common in 2000.
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trips in 1990 compared to 11 Use synonyms
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in 2010.
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, those who took the bus in 1990 were slightly more than in 2000. with a Linking Words
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