Children can learn effectively by watching television. therefore, they should be encouraged to watch television regularly at home and at school. to what extent do you agree or disagree.

Since its invention,
television
has always been at the centre of many debates. In recent times, it became
also
popular
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children as many parents started to use it as an educational tool. As expected,
this
new role of
television
arose discussion among people. In the upcoming
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I will discuss the benefits and the drawbacks that
this
additional function can bring.
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the end, I will add my own point of view. On the one hand, watching educational TV programs can be a valid alternative for kids that, perhaps
due to
serious health problems, cannot attend
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public school and are obligated to stay at home. In these particular cases, the family tends to hire a private teacher, even though it can often be expensive.
Therefore
, in order to reduce the costs, it could be useful for families to opt for science, math or history programs,
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recorded by real professors,
instead
of paying for private lessons.
Moreover
, it has been proved from various studies that watching cartoons in the original language makes
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children learn English faster. In fact, it has been demonstrated how young kids can focus better on
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learning
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the language if the one who speaks it is their
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character
instead
of their teacher.
On the other hand
, it is undeniable that TV has its own risks. One of them regards the social aspect: many infants that start very early to watch
television
are more likely to develop asocial features
such
as shyness, laziness and detachment from reality. Individuals during their childhood need to spend time with their classmates doing creative activities
such
as drawing, playing with toys,
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sports rather than sitting in front of a screen all
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afternoon. Only in
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they can develop the social skills that will determine their character and help them
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life in the future.
To conclude
, I believe that, even
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in some particular situations it could be a useful tool to teach new things, watching
television
shouldn't be
encouranged
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encouraged
by parents in order to prevent kids to become
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disinterested
in the real world and
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establishing relationships.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • passive
  • sedentary
  • limit
  • creativity
  • imagination
  • educational content
  • expose
  • different cultures
  • perspectives
  • negative effects
  • behavior
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