Some people think that schools are no longer necessary because children can get so much information available through the Internet while others believe that nothing can replace physical classrooms with direct guidance from teachers.Discuss both views( and give your own opinion).
There is growing sentiment today that the
internet
has sufficiently supplanted the role of traditional education so as to make it redundant. Others believe that teachers
and school play an important role in the growing-up of the child. From my point of view, I strongly believe that the internet
opens up possibilities for learning, and schools
are a crucial filter.
There is someone who advocates that the internet
can replace the significant role of teachers
and schools
showing that nearly everything can be found on the internet
. School-age children can study and learn more knowledge and skills through watching videos on social platforms such
as Youtube, Facebook, Instagram,etc or updating news by updating articles and documents. Internet
and social platforms bring students
much news and information
in all different fields. It is also
really convenient and fast, students
only need to search and find new information
through one click and after that, hundreds, millions of results related to their search keywords will be shown.
Nonetheless
, schools
are the real-world editors of the internet
. A lot of news is thrown up instantly and not carefully vetted. This
means that students
can be led into dark concerns from negative and not real content. Children and teens are especially susceptible to what they read online as they might be less sceptical. Teachers
have more life experience and their training helps them approach information
critically. They can pass their skills on to their pupils by teaching them how to read closely and check the information
through a number of primary schools
. Without teachers
, students
are more likely to be indoctrinated rather than educated.
In conclusion, teachers
are important to dispel the inherent risks of unreliable online information
. Schools
and administrators ought to take a long view in order to assess the value of the internet
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite