You would like to invite your friend from abroad to a public event in your country. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, describe the public event, ,explain why you think he/she would like the event, write how you can help your friend with accommodation

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Dear Peter, I am glad to know that you will come to London in 5 days. It is my great pleasure to tell you that the Gaming Show is held within 10

kilometers

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of my home. During

this

event, the hosts showcase hundreds of

games

from different categories, including but not limited to shooters, role-play, and real-time strategies. There are

also

players on the corresponding counters so that they can show you what each game looks like. I knew that you love a variety of video

games

a long time ago.

This

event allows you to immerse in different types of

games

. You can try out each game to see if you like it before you make the decision.

Moreover

, you will definitely meet lots of people who love video

games

as well, which gives you opportunities to make friends. I will pick you up once you arrive at the London airport. There is a vacant bedroom in my home so you can take it for free if you want.

Additionally

, if you prefer to live in hotels, there are a bunch of them around the venue of the event, with prices of less than 150 pounds. I look forward to seeing you. Kind regards,

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