The line graph compares how much time it would take for three companies to manufacture a refrigerator in 1990 and 2000.

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The information regarding the contrast how much time

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by three different businesses to make a fridge has been illustrated by a line graph in 1990 and 2000.

Overall

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, it can be inferred that

company

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C produces the least refrigerator the other two,

while

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company

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A shows high production of the fridge. At a first glance, it can be clearly seen that

company

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A produces refrigerators above 40,000 in 2000 and 2001.

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this

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, it frequently goes down to less than 30,000 in 2002.

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it produces around 20,000 in 2005.

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company

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B make less than 20,000 fridges in 2000. Gradually it increases in 2002 and reached 25,000

then

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, again decreases in 2003. Moving

further

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company

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C manufacture only 2000 fridges in 2000.

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declined to 1000 in 2001.

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, it escalate to 2000 in 2003. Later, it go down to 500 in 2004. In 2005 it produces just 400 refrigerators.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words company with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "goes down" was used 2 times.

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

153 words

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The line graph compares how much time it would take for three companies to manufacture a refrigerator in 1990 and 2000.

In many countries around the world, rural people are moving to cities, so the population in the countryside is decreasing. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

Some young people are leaving the country side to live in cities and towns leaving only young people in the countryside’s. What problems are caused by this issue ? what can be done to solve this situation

Many believe that modern technology has brought people together, but others say that it has driven us apart. Discuss both viewpoints and give your own opinion.