You have recently been on a vacation in a foreign country and stayed at a home-stay, you have realised that you have misplaced an expensive wristwatch and cannot find it. Write a letter to the family you stayed with. In your letter: Give details of your stay Describe your wristwatch If found how they could return it to you.

Dear Mr Peter
Last
week, I had a reservation for your
room
and was living for 2 days. My number
room
was 423 and has one master
room
and 2 small rooms and especially in having the backyard. It's nearby the lake
along with
natural resources. It's a beautiful view. We would like to back again if we have another vacation. Nearly ending the length of vacation, we will clean the
room
and prepare to check out the homestay. I thought the watch I left at your homestay. The watch looks old and
along with
me for 5 years, I would like to describe it to you, I was hoping you found it in the master
room
.
Firstly
, it has brown stray and the watch face is a circle shape.
Secondly
, it is made in Switzerland and the brand is Rolex.
Furthermore
, It's a special gift for me
as a result
of my parent bought it for me when I graduated my university. I was hoping you found it in my
room
, If you find it already, please give it to me. I appreciate that you give it back to me. If you have more information about my watch, feel free to reach out to me. Thanks and regards Vy Nguyen
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