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Art is considered an important part of society as well as an expression of its culture. Do you think it is important for children to be taught art? Do you think children should be encouraged to focus on arts rather than other subjects?

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Art
 is gaining more
acknowledgment
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 these days compared to the past. Indeed,
art
 plays important role in society and is expressed in the form of several activities and creations. Some people argue that
children
 should be taught about
Art
. I completely agree with
this
.
However
,
Children
 should not be encouraged to
focus
 only on
art
 rather than other subjects, as
children
 should be given the freedom to choose any
subject
that is
 appealing to them. As with any other
subject
 or knowledge,
children
 have to be introduced to many kinds of arts including paintings, traditional dance, traditional handcrafts, batik, and so on. some of these can be taught at school.
For example
, there is an
art
subject
 in almost elementary schools in Indonesia, where students learn to paint, make souvenirs from local wood, or practice Indonesian traditional dances. by learning these
art
 expressions the youth may appreciate their culture more.
On the other hand
, it is
also
 important for young people to understand other subjects
such
 as science, maths, Language, and physical exercise and not merely
focus
 on
art
. I personally believe that
children
 should be supported to
focus
 more on a
subject
 that they choose and they are good at. Some of them may choose
art
 as their major; because they have a talent and passion for
art
. In conclusion, it is important that
children
 be introduced to
art
, but whether they want to
focus
 more on
art
 is depend on their passion and talent.
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