The plans below show the site of an airport now and how it will look after redevelopment next year

The diagrams illustrate how the Southwest Airport will transform after renovation next year.
Overall
, it is readily apparent that the airport will be changed considerably. The main significant transformations are gates field, duty-free,
departures
and
arrivals
areas. At present, the north
side
has eight gates and a walkway which will be demolished and it will be replaced by a sky train.
Moreover
,
this
area will be expanded substantially by constructing two branches of corridors that will increase the number of boarding gates from eight to ten to accommodate more passengers and the sky train will be connected with duty-free shops in the future.  In the south
side
of the airport, the security section for
departures
and passport control custom for
arrivals
will remain in the same space.
Likewise
, the location of
departures
and
arrivals
entrances will remain as well but there will be attached additional doors. In the
departures
section, the current check-in counter will be moved from the left
side
to the right
side
which will be replaced by a bag drop section. Not only check-in spot will be moved but
also
a cafe, which will be moved nearby the left
side
of the departure entrance doors.
According to
the
arrivals
area, from empty space, there will be affixed a new café, ATM and built a hired floor for parking cars.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • terminal
  • car park
  • runways
  • redevelopment
  • proposed changes
  • expanded terminals
  • new gates
  • additional parking
  • amenities
  • navigation
  • environmental impact
  • economic impact
  • job creation
  • traffic congestion
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