In some countries young people are not only richer, but also safer and healtier than ever before. However, they are often less happy and more agitated in actions and behaviors. what do you think are the reasons for this and what can be done to help?

In many countries most young

people

are safe, they have

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good health and

much

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money.

However

, these young

people

are more

frustrating

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frustrated

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and more

sadness

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sad

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then

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than

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other.

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essay will discuss

this

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causes

for

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these issues and

propos

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propose

some

solution

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. One of the main causes of the problems

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is that

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that

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the

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delay rotini. Rich young

people

have

same

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the same

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rotini every day

,

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because they do not any

job

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jobs

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and

less

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fewer

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activities. The solution is that their families should make some

actives

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activities

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.

For example

,

children

must go to

gym

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the gym

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and

playing

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some football. Another

,

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problem is

that

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using smart

devises

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devices

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. Rich

children

use

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a smartphone

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smartphone

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smartphones

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every

time

.

Furthermore

, they always play games,

this

can

be harm

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their

bran

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brain

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. Where some studies show that

paly

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play

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game

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games

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like PUBG can make

children

more violent and more agitated. To

tack

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this

issue, parents must look at their

children

and they should give less

time

to

paly

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play

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gaming. A third cause is sleeping less. Rich

children

sleep

long

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a long

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time

in the

day

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daytime

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time

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because they do not have anything to do. Most of them wake up

11

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at 11

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pm or over

this

time

.

Moreover

, they sleep late

in

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night. To take forward

for

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this

problem, parents must make Mandatory sleep

in

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the normal

time

.

To sum up

, most young

people

are safe and they have

a

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good health and

a

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good money.

However

, these young

people

are more

frustrating

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frustrated

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and more

sadness

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sad

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then

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than

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other

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others

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, because

delay

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of delay

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rotini, using smart

devises

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devices

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and sleeping less. To solve these issues, their family must take action for these

such

as making

activates

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activities

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and

take

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taking

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care

for

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them.