After being involved in an accident, you were looked after by a person you did not know before. Write a special thank you letter. In your letter:  Introduce yourself and let him / her know why you are writing to him / her  Express your gratitude  Offer him / her to visit your home with his / her family

#accident #person #gratitude #offer #visit #home

Dear sir, I am John Smith, living in Pine Street, London. I am just writing to you with regards and extremely grateful for helping me when I met with a small accident. First of all, as you know

last

week on Friday, 7 February 2023 in the evening, my bike slipped on the green rock road in the city centre

due to

the construction work on the road. You were rushed to help me and provide medical services on

time

and saved my life. At that

time

you were my only hope to me. Moving on, thank you once again for

such

a great help because only with the help of you, are now I able to walk properly, as the doctor told me that if I was not reached on

time

in the hospital

then

I would have to suffer more.

Finally

, I would appreciate you if you accept my invitation to dinner at my residence #174, Pine Street, London. My humble request to you please find out some

time

from your busy schedule and come with your family to my home. Let me know

accordingly

so that I will manage everything

according to

your taste. My email ID is [email protected] I look forward to hearing from you soon. Yours Sincerely, John Smith

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