the maps below show an industrial area in the town of norbition, and planned future development of the site

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The two maps illustrate the town of Norbition where

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the area of an industrial estate and the developed site in the future scheme.

Overall

, in the next future plan, the size of the town remains the same whilst there will be a connected road from a roundabout across to the river.

Furthermore

, all factories will be replaced by residences and will involve five new facilities. Looking into the details, it could be seen that the old roundabout at the north side is improved by constructing an additional road to cross the river and accessible way to farmland meanwhile at the west is connected to a playground and school and there are shopping spots and medical centre located at the southern side.

Moreover

, the current farmland

that is

situated at the centre of the town will be moved to the eastern side and eight factories will no longer be present in the future but will be replaced by a new residential community.

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