the charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances
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washing
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machines
refrigirator
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cleaners
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this
per week, over a 99-year period
between 1920 and 2019.
Overall
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end
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period
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15 hours in 1980. Having Correct your spelling
approximately
leveled
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figure
then
fell slowly at the
end
of the period
.
By contrast
, in terms of refrigirator
, there was a sharp incline from 1920 Correct your spelling
refrigerator
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1960 the figures as 0% and Correct your spelling
until
then
it
became 90%. After that, it was a slight increase, after which the Correct pronoun usage
they
figure
remaind
stable at 100%in 1980 and until 2000. Correct your spelling
remained
remains
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, a
washing machine showed a Correct article usage
the
flactuation
, it went up slightly, Correct your spelling
fluctuation
at
40% compared to 70% from 1920 until 1960, the Change preposition
to
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around
at the
end
of the period
.
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vacuum
cleaner
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cleaners
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electric
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