You have just spend a weekend staying at The Taj hotel in Mumbai. When you get home you find out that you have left a bag at the hotel. Write a letter to the manager. Explain in the letter: *When did you visit the hotel. *the details of your room and the bag * how can one identify the bag

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Dear sir/madam, My name is selva and was stayed at your
hotel
last
week Tuesday.I would like to write a letter regarding my
laptop
bag
that was left at your
hotel
. I will hope that you found and return it to me.
Last
week I had an important meeting in your
hotel
. so that I arrived 1 day earlier at your Mumbai Taj
hotel
.
Moreover
, I was booked 2 nights for a suite
room
with a balcony. after finishing my meeting I vacated the
room
and
then
returns back to my home. When I come back home my
laptop
bag
has been missed. I left it in your
hotel
room
. I stayed in
Room
no 343 on the Fourth floor.
As well as
my
bag
contains an HP
laptop
also
. It is a black colour
bag
and silver coating
laptop
. I was put on the table. I hope that you will be concerned about my letter and send it to me as soon as possible . I am waiting for your attention. Yours Faithfully, selva.
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