The map shows how coastal land develops into a coastal park.

The map shows how coastal land develops into a coastal park.
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The given maps compare some differences between
a
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coastal
land
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and a coastal
park
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after the development in an undefined area.
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, farm buildings are changed to a
car
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park
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with many green areas outside and the allowance of visitors to go to the beach. Looking at the first map for more detail, farm buildings were connected
with
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the main road.
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, on the left side of these
building
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buildings
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, there was an area for breeding animals next to unutilised
land
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. In the Eastern part, there was a large area of agricultural
land
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for growing crops. Looking at the South of the map, cliffs were in front of the beach and the ocean. After the development, there are several significant changes
of
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this
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coastal
land
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. The farm buildings are repurposed by a new
car
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park
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, and a coffee shop was added on the North East side of
this
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constuction
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construction
. Meanwhile, the surrounding
land
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around the
car
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park
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was replaced by wood trees, and a lake was constructed on the left of the
car
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park
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. There are some steps on the cliffs to allow people to visit the beach and go
to swim
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swimming
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in the sea.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words land, park, car with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "changed" was used 2 times.
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