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Explain some of the ways in which humans are damaging the environment.What can governments do to address these problems? What individual people can do.

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In our modern life numerous populations have been destroying the environment in different ways Many communities consider that deforestation and global warming are caused by damage the nature and the government and citizens can solve
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 to cut down the flora and decreasing the burden is very harmful to humans and creatures, creatures are a vital part of our existence and crowd should always protect them and it is caused by the reduction of wood and
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 the loss of habitat of many vegetation and animals,sometimes even cause the extinction of many things.
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,when using an excessive amount of fossil fuels can produce poisonous exhaust and global warming. A possible solution to
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 some fines for those who cut down greenery and reduce global warming. These strategies help the community and not only animals. A homeless survivor can be a great tool, and it’s very rewarding. In conclusion, damage to nature is an impasse that has been bothering the community for a long time, and it has some solutions,
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 because it is beneficial for the crowd and animals.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Pollution: contamination, emissions, pollutants, industrial waste
  • Deforestation: habitat loss, biodiversity, urban development, logging
  • Climate Change: greenhouse gases, global warming, fossil fuels, renewable energy
  • Overfishing: unsustainable, fish stocks, marine ecosystems, conservation
  • Waste Production: non-biodegradable, plastics, recycling, waste management systems
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