The bar chart below shows estimated world illiteracy rates by region and by gender for the last year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
This
graph illustrates the estimated world illiteracy
proportions for males and females
, by region and by year.
Firstly
, the highest rate
for females
was in South Asia
to
almost 55. Change preposition
apply
Secondly
, Arab States were in second place for female illiteracy
percentage, 51. Followed by Sub-Saharan Africa it was at48
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at 48
Also
, These were the highest three countries for females
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female
illiteracy
rates. But in East Asia
, the illiteracy
rate
dropped to 20, then
it fell to 11 in Latin America. Moreover
, for males illiteracy
the proportions were much lower than Add a comma
,illiteracy
in
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for
females
. The highest three countries were in South Asia
, Arab States and Sub-Saharan Africa, to
nearly 35, 29 and 30. Change preposition
with
Lastly
, the proportion of illiteracy
in Developed countries was the lowest rate
of all.
Overall
, in Latin America
the Add a comma
,America
rate
for
male Change preposition
of
illiteracy
was at 10, which is low compared to others. Then
comes East Asia
lower than the Caribbean rate
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