The bar chart below shows estimated world illiteracy rates by region and by gender for the last year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart below shows estimated world illiteracy rates by region and by gender for the last year.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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This
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graph illustrates the estimated world
illiteracy
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proportions for males and
females
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, by region and by year.
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, the highest
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for
females
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was in South
Asia
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almost 55.
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, Arab States were in second place for female
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percentage, 51. Followed by Sub-Saharan Africa it was
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at 48
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, These were the highest three countries for
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females
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illiteracy
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rates. But in East
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, the
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rate
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dropped to 20,
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it fell to 11 in Latin America.
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, for males
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illiteracy
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the proportions were much lower than
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for
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females
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. The highest three countries were in South
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, Arab States and Sub-Saharan Africa,
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nearly 35, 29 and 30.
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, the proportion of
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in Developed countries was the lowest
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of all.
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, in Latin
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the
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for
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male
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was at 10, which is low compared to others.
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comes East
Asia
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lower than the Caribbean
rate
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.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Replace the words illiteracy, females, rate, asia with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "proportions" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Illiteracy rates
  • Region
  • Gender disparity
  • Bar chart
  • Estimated
  • Summarise
  • Main features
  • Comparisons
  • Analyzing
  • Discrepancies
  • Significant
  • Pronounced
  • Speculation
  • Male
  • Female
  • Global perspective
  • Literacy
  • Educational attainment
  • Socio-economic factors
  • Cultural influences
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