Obviously, if most people have a chance to betterment their
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and make happier their guests, sometimes they will spend money unconsciously. Some advocate that wasting money
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type of
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would be mainly needless behaviour. I partly agree with
this
statement. In
this
essay, I will illustrate the pros and cons of expenditures of large weddings based on my perspective and support examination as well.
To begin
with, people who work as CEO or are
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usually prefer to go
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places and arrange their
in well-known restaurants. So, these attitudes actually depend on vanity.
Also
, big parties and weddings usually demonstrate
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owner how
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. Because if they obtain huge and significant connections, they are obliged to invite all of them to their special days.
Moreover
, if you forget someone before making
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letter, you would
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lose your network with somebody.
On the flip side, most people already prefer to arrange their parties and their special
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,
also
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for only their relatives, close friends and
.
Hence
, they have
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to choose little places
such
as
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,
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. some particular companies or agencies already can deal with
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.
As a result
of
this
action, they can save their capital.
For instance
, they order menus and tables
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restaurants equally with their guests,
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that day some of them couldn't participate in
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.
In conclusion, the latter
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would be true for me.
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would get a chance to be an important person in the future,
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will arrange
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party for all of my
.