You have just spend a weekend staying at The Taj hotel in Mumbai. When you get home you find out that you have left a bag at the hotel. Write a letter to the manager. Explain in the letter: *When did you visit the hotel. *the details of your room and the bag * how can one identify the bag

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Dear Sir
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weekend, I have a vacation with my family and reserve your hotel for living in Mumbai. We booked two rooms.
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, the
room
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for my parents.
Secondly
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, the
room
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for me and 2 young brothers. I have lost my
bag
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in my
room
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since we left
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country.
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, My
room
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is 423 number
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the canteen. It has a double bed and full equipment for 3 folks living there.
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, my
bag
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's colour is red and old.
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Moreover
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it is made in the USA and has 4 wheels. I think I put it back in my clothes, that's why I forgot the
bag
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.
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that,
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is an easy identity. When I went to
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country, the ticker of the airport tagged the branch name tick for me. It's the left side of the
bag
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. I think it's easy to identify the
bag
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. I'm forward to hearing from you and if you have
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information about the
bag
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, feel free to reach out to me. Thanks and regards Vy
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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