Governments should spend money on railways rather than roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Some
people
said that government should spend money on
railways
rather than roads.
However
, other
people
have
opposite
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opinion
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. I suggest that my answer will
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on how is the
people
living environment. I will illustrate details in the paragraph below.We all know that building
railways
or
road
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roads
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is
a
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best way to improve traffic
problem
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or develop
local
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economic
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.
However
, building a
railway
needs more conditions than building a road.
Firstly
, the cost of building
railways
is much higher than building roads. And you need to decide where is the best place to set up a train station. A suitable location for a train station should be a place where a lot of
people
live
in
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currently or in a near future.
Therefore
, if your
country
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not
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have enough population or your population is decreasing, it rather
to
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build a road than a
railway
.
Secondly
, it depends on
how
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your
country
looks like. If the land of your
country
goes up and down,
for example
, there are many mountains or valleys in your
country
,
then
building a
railway
will be a very hard task and cost a lot of fortune.
On the other hand
, it is more
economic
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to build a
railway
when your land is flat.
To sum up
, there is no right or wrong of government should build
railways
or roads. It all depends on the conditions of your
country
. If you have
many
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population
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and
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they
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live
closely
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and most of your land is flat,
then
I would say your
country
may get benefit from building
railways
.
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  • Efficiency
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