The table below shows the total amount of road traffic in the London borough of Enfield for the years 2008 - 2015

The table below shows the total amount of road traffic in the London borough of Enfield for the years 2008 - 2015
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The table depicts the number of traffic in London which was categorized into seven types of
vehicles
and surveyed annually between 2008 and 2015.
Overall
, all of the surveyed
vehicles
indicated upward trends,
whereas
only light
goods
vehicles
and heavy
goods
vehicles
had downward tendencies,
while
all
vehicles
remained unchanged. In detail, 618.673 cars were the highest amount in 2008. Unfortunately,
this
number had a decline in the following year.
However
, in 2011, it increased dramatically to 644.208 even though
this
trend did not
last
long and began to fall in 2015 to 605.323. Pedal cycles, motorcycles, buses and coaches
also
experienced a similar pattern, which fluctuated significantly from the first year to the end of the period.
On the other hand
, the amount of light
goods
vehicles
rose gradually from 110.150 in 2008
then
experienced a dip to 87.397 in 2011. Afterwards,
this
number had a major shot up to 115.331 in the
last
year. Heavy
goods
also
revealed a positive figure that moderately increased over time between 2008 and 2015.
Additionally
, all
vehicles
remained stabilized.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also, last".
Vocabulary: Replace the words vehicles, goods with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "trends" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
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