The maps shows the town of Lynnfield

The maps shows the town of Lynnfield
The maps indicate the alteration of Lynnfield town from 1936 to 2007.
Overall
, the northern area focused on a residential area,
while
the southern region was used more for road facilitation and recreational purposes.
Moreover
, the centre side focused on shopping, hobbies, and business purposes. In detail, before being altered into household places, the north green area was almost fully cleared. In 2007, the river was demolished and the trees were
also
cut by society.
In addition
, in the southern region, after building new museums and golf courses for society, the government destroyed farmland and offices.
Furthermore
, roads are
also
built into stable and straight roads after removing cycle paths.
On the other hand
, in the centre of the town, before being ameliorated into hobbies and business purposes, the place was filled with specific and conventional shops,
such
as flower and candy stores, butchers, and post offices. In 2007, banks and libraries remained unchanged.
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