The charts below show changes in the cost of visiting a national park in the country from 2011 to 2018 as well as the number of visitors to national parks each year.
These two graphs show the
number
of visitors
and prices for visiting the national park
.
From 2011 to 2018 there were variations and changes in the prices for entering the park
, as well as
changes in the cost of entering the park
per person.
In 2011 approximately the price of admission to the park
per person was $7, this
was changing in 2013 with an increase in the cost of admission per person to $8. On the other hand
, the price in 2015 and 2018 was similar, costing approximately $15.
2017 saw the highest number
of visitors
to the park
reaching approximately 0.53 million
. On the other hand
, in 2011 there was the least number
of visitors
to the park
with an approximate sum of 0.28 million
. The trend of visitors
to the park
in the years 2013, 2014, and 2015 were
almost similar, obtaining the Change the verb form
was
park
's approximately visit of 0.40 million
. Finally
, the national park
had a drop in the number
of visitors
in 2018 to 0.45 million
compared to 2017.Submitted by itchayatop31 on
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