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This
chart
shows the changes in the cost of visiting a national
park
in the country from 2011 to 2018
as well as
the
number
of
visitors
to national
parks
each year. It is evident from the
chart
that the cost to visit the
park
in 2011 started at 8$ and in 2014 the
ticket
price
has risen again to 10$.
However
, the
price
is not the highest on
this
graph. In 2015, the biggest increase in
this
chart
was 15$, but in 2016 the
ticket
price
dropped to 10$, the same as in 2014, and in 2017 the
price
gradually increased from 12$ to 15$ in 2018 and equal to 2015. From the
chart
in 2011, it can be seen that the
number
of
people
visiting national
parks
was almost 0.3
millions
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. From 2012 to 2014, the
number
of
visitors
to national
parks
began to increase gradually from 0.35
millions
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to 0.43
millions
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. The
Visitors
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to National
Parks
began to decline to 0.40 million as National
park
tickets in 2015 became more expensive than ever, leading to 2016-2017 peaking in the
number
of national
park
visitors
and the highest
chart
is 0.52-0.53
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people
, because in 2016-2017, the
price
of tickets for visiting the national
park
has been adjusted, and in 2018,
people
visiting the national
park
decreased from 2017 to 0.8 million
people
due to
the
price
of the national
park
entrance
ticket
being adjusted highest again.
Overall
, most
people
will only go crazy for
parks
when
park
ticket
prices drop even more because tickets to the national
parks
are cheaper than in 2015 and 2018.
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