You are planning to give a party at home. You want to cook a meal for this party and decided to ask a friend for a recipe from his/her country. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter -Tell the friend why you are giving this party -Explain why you want a recipe from his/her country -Invite your friend to the party

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Dear Sheila, It's been a

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since I heard from you, I hope you and your family are doing well. I am writing

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letter to let you know that my husband's birthday will be coming up on 2nd April 2023 and that I am planning to organize a party in our home to that effect.

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letter is intended to serve two purposes; first to request that you send me three or more Kenyan recipes and second to invite you to

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birthday party. I know you might be wondering why I require Kenyan recipes, the reason is that my husband's new workplace I told you about some time ago is a Kenyan company and the company has Kenyans make up about 35 per cent of her entire workforce and it will not be nice if I invite them for a party but fail to serve them their familiar dishes to their delight. Thank you and I hope to receive a comprehensive recipe from you as soon as you can;

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remember that I will appreciate your presence on that day. Warm regards, Oluchi

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

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7 paragraphs

185 words

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