To meet the growing need for food by an increasing population, a country should make use of genetically engineered foods. However, some people believe that such foods are not only unhealthy but affect nature too. Discuss both the viewpoints and give your own opinion.

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Today, new technology and improvements are viewed not always with excitement.

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, genetically engineered crops. Shortage of

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and limitation of space had gathered scientists and farmers to solve

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problem by enhancing

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and amount of fruits produced by

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. But some say that enhancements are harmful to humans and nature. In

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engineering.

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I believe that implementing new qualities to vegetation has health benefits.

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, in Africa people do not have a big variety of

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to grow which means that some could lack minerals and

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crucial to stay healthy and

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a strong immune system. The

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organizations saw that it is hard for Africans to get vitamin A with their

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decided to modify banana plant cells in order to produce fruits with vitamin A.

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not only was cheaper than producing tablet

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more nutritious as bananas are a great

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source filled with other

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addition

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genetically modified organisms are cheaper to produce. The change in

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' genes can help them fight against parasites.

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way the farmers will need to use

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pesticides to grow healthy

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fruits of it without damage.

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, engineering could lead to

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of a variety of vegetation. Because the

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can be enhanced to withstand bugs or harsh weather means that they can live everywhere and spread faster.

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, overgrowing the

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which grow naturally can lead to extinction.

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is bad news for the animals as there are some that only survive on one plant like koalas. They only eat eucalyptus leaves. In conclusion, genetically engineered

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is a good solution

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countries with high starvation rates which have a lack of

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selection

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not getting enough

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or minerals

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their

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has disadvantages as it can overpopulate other species of

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and drive them to extinction.

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