To meet the growing need for food by an increasing population, a country should make use of genetically engineered foods. However, some people believe that such foods are not only unhealthy but affect nature too. Discuss both the viewpoints and give your own opinion.
Today, new technology and improvements are viewed not always with excitement.
For instance
, genetically engineered crops. Shortage of food
and limitation of space had gathered scientists and farmers to solve this
problem by enhancing properties
and amount of fruits produced by Correct article usage
the properties
plants
. But some say that enhancements are harmful to humans and nature. In this
essay
I will provide points that consider the good and the bad when it comes to Add a comma
,essay
plant
engineering.
Change the verb form
planting
First,
I believe that implementing new qualities to vegetation has health benefits. For example
, in Africa people do not have a big variety of plants
to grow which means that some could lack minerals and vitamins
crucial to stay healthy and build
a strong immune system. The Wrong verb form
building
non profit
organizations saw that it is hard for Africans to get vitamin A with their Add a hyphen
non-profit
food
therefore
decided to modify banana plant cells in order to produce fruits with vitamin A. Correct word choice
and therefore
This
not only was cheaper than producing tablet vitamins
,
but Remove the comma
apply
also
more nutritious as bananas are a great food
source filled with other vitamins
. In
addition
genetically modified organisms are cheaper to produce. The change in Add a comma
,addition
plants
' genes can help them fight against parasites. This
way the farmers will need to use less
pesticides to grow healthy Change the quantifier
fewer
plants
and the
fruits of it without damage.
Change the word
their
On the other hand
, engineering could lead to destruction
of a variety of vegetation. Because the Add an article
the destruction
plants
can be enhanced to withstand bugs or harsh weather means that they can live everywhere and spread faster. Therefore
, overgrowing the plants
which grow naturally can lead to extinction. Moreover
, this
is bad news for the animals as there are some that only survive on one plant like koalas. They only eat eucalyptus leaves.
In conclusion, genetically engineered food
is a good solution to
countries with high starvation rates which have a lack of Change preposition
for
food
selection therefore
not getting enough vitamins
or minerals with
their Change preposition
in
food
. But it also
has disadvantages as it can overpopulate other species of plants
and drive them to extinction.Submitted by oimigle on
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