To meet the growing need for food by an increasing population, a country should make use of genetically engineered foods. However, some people believe that such foods are not only unhealthy but affect nature too. Discuss both the viewpoints and give your own opinion.

Today, new technology and improvements are viewed not always with excitement.
For instance
, genetically engineered crops. Shortage of
food
and limitation of space had gathered scientists and farmers to solve
this
problem by enhancing
properties
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and amount of fruits produced by
plants
. But some say that enhancements are harmful to humans and nature. In
this
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I will provide points that consider the good and the bad when it comes to
plant
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engineering.
First,
I believe that implementing new qualities to vegetation has health benefits.
For example
, in Africa people do not have a big variety of
plants
to grow which means that some could lack minerals and
vitamins
crucial to stay healthy and
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a strong immune system. The
non profit
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organizations saw that it is hard for Africans to get vitamin A with their
food
therefore
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decided to modify banana plant cells in order to produce fruits with vitamin A.
This
not only was cheaper than producing tablet
vitamins
,
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but
also
more nutritious as bananas are a great
food
source filled with other
vitamins
.
In
addition
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genetically modified organisms are cheaper to produce. The change in
plants
' genes can help them fight against parasites.
This
way the farmers will need to use
less
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pesticides to grow healthy
plants
and
the
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fruits of it without damage.
On the other hand
, engineering could lead to
destruction
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of a variety of vegetation. Because the
plants
can be enhanced to withstand bugs or harsh weather means that they can live everywhere and spread faster.
Therefore
, overgrowing the
plants
which grow naturally can lead to extinction.
Moreover
,
this
is bad news for the animals as there are some that only survive on one plant like koalas. They only eat eucalyptus leaves. In conclusion, genetically engineered
food
is a good solution
to
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countries with high starvation rates which have a lack of
food
selection
therefore
not getting enough
vitamins
or minerals
with
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their
food
. But it
also
has disadvantages as it can overpopulate other species of
plants
and drive them to extinction.
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