Many governments have laws that ban the sale and use of hard drugs such as heroin and cocaine, yet they allow people to buy drugs such as tobacco and alcohol. Laws that prohibit the sale and use of hard drugs should be applied to all drugs, including tobacco and alcohol.

Many individuals we know personally have their vices. The most common are smoking
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& drinking
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. Abuse of hard
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as heroin and cocaine is considered taboo in society and amongst family & friends. I believe the restriction on hard
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should not be lifted, but cigarettes and liquor consumption should not be illegal. Consumption of
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is indeed the leading cause of various health issues and public concerns. It can cause cancer, heart disease, and addiction to smoking. Secondhand smoke
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affects other people with issues of a similar degree.
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, excessive consumption of
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is
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the leading cause of liver disease, diabetes, and an increased risk of cancer.
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lead to antisocial and disruptive behaviour in individuals, leading to physical altercations, domestic abuse, and accidents caused by driving under the influence.
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, these types of substances should be scrutinised in the same way as the government does for hard
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and
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are substantially less damaging and addictive than cocaine or heroin.
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, the general public can safely consume
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without letting it get out of hand. Plus, it
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allows people to get comfortable in a social setting. Smoking is just as bad, but the banning of the substance can lead people to seek out hard
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, which are far more harmful than
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. In conclusion, there should not be a ban on the sale of
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and liquor legally, as they do pose problems for society.
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, expose individuals to much higher risks, legally and health-wise. The government should invest in educational campaigns, advertisements, and policies that help citizens make an informed choice. Balancing legality with education remains the key to a healthier society.

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Make your start and end clear. Say your view at the start and finish with a short wrap up.
coherence
Keep one main idea in each part. Begin each part with a small line that tells what you will say. Use short, clear sentences.
coherence
Give strong proof for your view. Use a real detail or two. Do not repeat ideas; add a new point or example.
lexical
Use simple, common words. Keep a calm tone and avoid long, hard words.
task response
Your view on the topic is clear and steady.
coherence
You link ideas with words like Nevertheless and For instance.
content
You give points on health and social harm that fit the topic.
Your opinion

Don’t put your opinion unless you are asked to give it.

If the question asks what you think, you MUST give your opinion to get a good score.

Don’t leave your opinion until the conclusion.

Here are examples of instructions that require you to give your opinion:

...do you agree or disagree?...do you think...?...your opinion...?

Topic Vocabulary:
  • Chronic diseases
  • Substance abuse
  • Psychological dependency
  • Social stigma
  • Preventive measures
  • Legislative framework
  • Healthcare expenditure
  • Judicial system
  • Prohibition era
  • Civil liberties
  • Tax revenues
  • Harm reduction
  • Ethical considerations
  • Public health policy
  • Addiction treatment
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