You are having a party and want to invite your friend from a different city. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: • Describe why you are having the party • Give directions on how to get to the venue • Suggest how you can accommodate him/her

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Dear Chris, I am glad to invite you to a party I am going to arrange for my 2nd baby's birth. I know it would take you more than 20 hours to reach my city by train, so I am asking you about one week in advance. on the 1st of April is my 2nd child 3rd birthday. My whole family planned

this

time to celebrate in a

hotel

rather than at home. We decided to invite our all close friends and relatives. The event is going to take place in the Star Capital

hotel

. It is about 10 kilometres from the train station. You can hire a car and ask to go National Bank. The

hotel

is exactly opposite the Bank. Ask the driver to drive you by the new link road, which not only will take you to the destination faster, but

also

you can enjoy the newly opened half-kilometre shopping mall. As I arranged your room in my house. we will directly go there and you can

have rested

Wrong verb form

rest

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there. please avoid any

hotel

booking. I insist you stay with me for a minimum of three days, so kindly arrange to take those days off from the office before you move. Cannot wait to see you. Yours lovingly, Mandeep Singh

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coherence and cohesion

Ensure that the greeting and closing are formal and appropriate for a letter to a friend.

coherence and cohesion

Maintain a consistent structure and organizational pattern throughout the letter, with clear transitions between ideas.

task achievement

Focus on directly and clearly addressing all parts of the task prompt, including providing directions on how to get to the venue and suggesting accommodations for the friend.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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2Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Grammar mistakes
 

8 paragraphs

213 words

6.50

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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You are having a party and want to invite your friend from a different city. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: • Describe why you are having the party • Give directions on how to get to the venue • Suggest how you can accommodate him/her

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

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Research indicates that the characteristics we are born with have much more influence on our personality and development than any experiences we may have in our life. Which do you consider to be the major influence?