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You are having a party and want to invite your friend from a different city. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: • Describe why you are having the party • Give directions on how to get to the venue • Suggest how you can accommodate him/her

#party #friend #city #directions #venue
Dear Chris, I am glad to invite you to a party I am going to arrange for my 2nd baby's birth. I know it would take you more than 20 hours to reach my city by train, so I am asking you about one week in advance. on the 1st of April is my 2nd child 3rd birthday. My whole family planned
this
 time to celebrate in a
hotel
 rather than at home. We decided to invite our all close friends and relatives. The event is going to take place in the Star Capital
hotel
. It is about 10 kilometres from the train station. You can hire a car and ask to go National Bank. The
hotel
 is exactly opposite the Bank. Ask the driver to drive you by the new link road, which not only will take you to the destination faster, but
also
 you can enjoy the newly opened half-kilometre shopping mall. As I arranged your room in my house. we will directly go there and you can
have rested
Wrong verb form
rest
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 there. please avoid any
hotel
 booking. I insist you stay with me for a minimum of three days, so kindly arrange to take those days off from the office before you move. Cannot wait to see you. Yours lovingly, Mandeep Singh
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coherence and cohesion
Ensure that the greeting and closing are formal and appropriate for a letter to a friend.
coherence and cohesion
Maintain a consistent structure and organizational pattern throughout the letter, with clear transitions between ideas.
task achievement
Focus on directly and clearly addressing all parts of the task prompt, including providing directions on how to get to the venue and suggesting accommodations for the friend.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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