Some people say that adversiting is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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there is an opinion that advertising is still creative and attractive enough to persuade
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to buy their products, others believe that
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are saturated, so
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no longer pay attention to them. Personally, I agree to side with the former. On the one hand, it is the cyber era these days,
advertisements
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can be seen everywhere, anytime and it is annoying for many
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. Ads appeared before or even during the video that an individual watched on Youtube or they can be even found on any website that
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visited. Some of them hide the contents on the websites and cause disturbed. So many
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are done with it and ignore the attendance of
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.
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,
advertisements
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are still effective.
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, Google, Meta and Tiktok develop the algorithm to know more about which products that consumers are interested in. These companies
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on the post that an individual reacts to or the search history, so that they can show the most suitable ads for each person.
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, advertising still plays a significant role introduce products and persuade
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to shop. In conclusion,
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the widespread of
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makes it becomes unattractive and annoying, it still manages to capture
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's needs and to buy with willingness. In my opinion, I believe that advertising has its positive and negative effects. So, I am standing on the fence as it does fulfil some of my desire, but sometimes it annoys me, especially when it appears in my mailbox.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • persuade
  • promote
  • attract
  • influence
  • impact
  • consumerism
  • commercialism
  • market
  • product
  • brand
  • endorsement
  • manipulative
  • saturated
  • overwhelmed
  • repetitive
  • distracting
  • irrelevant
  • exaggerated
  • misleading
  • desensitized
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