The graph below shows the number of overseas visitors to three different areas in a European country between 1987 and 2007 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the number of overseas visitors to three different areas in a European country between 1987 and 2007

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph illustrates how many
tourists
visit three different areas in a European country from 1987 to 2007. The areas shown are the coast, the mountains and the lakes.
Overall
, it can clearly be seen that most
of
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the
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tourists
visit the coast,
while
less
number
of
tourists
visit the mountains. First of all, the
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coast
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visitors
was 40
thousand
people in 1987.
Then
the
number
started to fall significantly reaching almost 35
thousand
in 1992. By far, it continued to increase gradually year by year reaching higher than 70
thousand
tourists
in 2007.
According to
the
visitors
of
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the mountains, the
number
of people visiting them was 20
thousand
in 1987. Interestingly, the digit kept jumping until landing on 30
thousand
traveller
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in 1997. After that, the form remained constant for a year
,
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but began to rise ending with 35
thousand
in 2007.
On the other hand
, the
visitors
of
the
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lakes reached 10
thousand
people in 1987 which was the least
number
of travellers among the other areas. Surprisingly, it made a move in going up sharply reaching approximately 75
thousand
visitors
in 2002. Unfortunately, the
number
of
visitors
declined in 2007 landing
on
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exactly 50
thousand
tourists
.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words tourists, number, visitors, thousand with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Fluctuate
  • Significant
  • Trends
  • Comparative analysis
  • Peak
  • Trough
  • Growth
  • Decline
  • Steady
  • Surge
  • Plummet
  • Consistency
  • Highlight
  • Reinforce
  • Data representation
  • Time frame
  • Subject matter
  • Overseas visitors
  • Tourism promotion
  • Transportation
  • Accommodation facilities
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