The graph below shows the number of overseas visitors to three different areas in a European country between 1987 and 2007 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the number of overseas visitors to three different areas in a European country between 1987 and 2007

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The graph illustrates how many
tourists
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visit three different areas in a European country from 1987 to 2007. The areas shown are the coast, the mountains and the lakes.
Overall
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, it can clearly be seen that most
of
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the
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tourists
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visit the coast,
while
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less
number
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of
tourists
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visit the mountains. First of all, the
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number of coast
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coast
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visitors
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was 40
thousand
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people in 1987.
Then
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the
number
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started to fall significantly reaching almost 35
thousand
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in 1992. By far, it continued to increase gradually year by year reaching higher than 70
thousand
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tourists
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in 2007.
According to
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the
visitors
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of
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to
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the mountains, the
number
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of people visiting them was 20
thousand
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in 1987. Interestingly, the digit kept jumping until landing on 30
thousand
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traveller
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travellers
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in 1997. After that, the form remained constant for a year
,
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but began to rise ending with 35
thousand
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in 2007.
On the other hand
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, the
visitors
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of
the
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lakes reached 10
thousand
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people in 1987 which was the least
number
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of travellers among the other areas. Surprisingly, it made a move in going up sharply reaching approximately 75
thousand
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visitors
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in 2002. Unfortunately, the
number
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of
visitors
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declined in 2007 landing
on
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exactly 50
thousand
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tourists
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.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words tourists, number, visitors, thousand with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Fluctuate
  • Significant
  • Trends
  • Comparative analysis
  • Peak
  • Trough
  • Growth
  • Decline
  • Steady
  • Surge
  • Plummet
  • Consistency
  • Highlight
  • Reinforce
  • Data representation
  • Time frame
  • Subject matter
  • Overseas visitors
  • Tourism promotion
  • Transportation
  • Accommodation facilities
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