The graph below shows the number of overseas visitors to three different areas in a European country between 1987 and 2007 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph illustrates how many
tourists
visit three different areas in a European country from 1987 to 2007. The areas shown are the coast, the mountains and the lakes. Use synonyms
Overall
, it can clearly be seen that most Linking Words
of
Change preposition
apply
the
Correct article usage
apply
tourists
visit the coast, Use synonyms
while
less Linking Words
number
of Use synonyms
tourists
visit the mountains.
First of all, the Use synonyms
Correct quantifier usage
number of coast
coast
Replace the word
coastal
visitors
was 40 Use synonyms
thousand
people in 1987. Use synonyms
Then
the Linking Words
number
started to fall significantly reaching almost 35 Use synonyms
thousand
in 1992. By far, it continued to increase gradually year by year reaching higher than 70 Use synonyms
thousand
Use synonyms
tourists
in 2007. Use synonyms
According to
the Linking Words
visitors
Use synonyms
of
the mountains, the Change preposition
to
number
of people visiting them was 20 Use synonyms
thousand
in 1987. Interestingly, the digit kept jumping until landing on 30 Use synonyms
thousand
Use synonyms
traveller
in 1997. After that, the form remained constant for a yearChange to a plural noun
travellers
,
but began to rise ending with 35 Remove the comma
apply
thousand
in 2007.
Use synonyms
On the other hand
, the Linking Words
visitors
of Use synonyms
the
lakes reached 10 Change preposition
to the
thousand
people in 1987 which was the least Use synonyms
number
of travellers among the other areas. Surprisingly, it made a move in going up sharply reaching approximately 75 Use synonyms
thousand
Use synonyms
visitors
in 2002. Unfortunately, the Use synonyms
number
of Use synonyms
visitors
declined in 2007 landing Use synonyms
on
exactly 50 Change preposition
apply
thousand
Use synonyms
tourists
.Use synonyms
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Vocabulary: Replace the words tourists, number, visitors, thousand with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
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