The table illustrates the 6 languages which are the most popular in the world with the number of people use it.
The table provides data on the most frequently used
languages
all over the world and the number of native speakers
and speakers
as the second language
.
It is clear that
Mandarin Chinese is the most popular language
among the citizens of China, there are 900 million
of
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speakers
and they make almost
90% of the total. Change preposition
up almost
However
, the most common language
as an additional one is English, number
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the number
speakers
make
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makes
million
people.
Probing further
, Hindi and Spanish languages
are quite frequently used among both: native speakers
and foreigners. There are more than 350 million
native speakers
for
both. Change preposition
of
However
, there are 2 languages
that are quite popular among locals, but almost unpopular among others. Arabic and Portuguese have only 24 and 10 million
speakers
as an additional language
relatively.
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languages
Overall
, Asian languages
have a lot of users among citizens of Asian countries, when European languages
are used all over the world as a way of communication.Submitted by mgshetler on
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