It is important for children to learn the different between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? What sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behavior to children?

It is believed that

punishment

is necessary to educate

children

to learn the difference between right and wrong at an small age. In my opinion, I partly agree with

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This

essay with first analyzes some of the main reasons and

then

suggest possible solutions to teach good

behavior

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behaviour

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to

children

. Indeed,

punishment

is a better way to educate

children

more faster and effectively. Proof of

this

is when

children

cheated on tests at school,

teachers

found that they will punish the pupils by giving them low scores and cleaning the class

at the end

of the lesson.

Hence

,

children

will be afraid and know their action was wrong.

However

, depending

punishment

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on punishment

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will harm effect on

children

. In mental problems,

children

tend to scare all the time whenever they do wrong. In physical problems,

children

will hurt their bodies with severe

punishment

.

For example

, in a lot of case abusive

punishment

of

children

to educate lead to they will have mental illness and harm to their health.

On the other hand

,

instead

of using

punishment

to educate

children

, parents, and

teachers

could listen to

children

to understand them more. In fact, parents and

teachers

influence education. When

children

make mistakes, parents and

teachers

should listen to

children

’s opinions and

then

analyze which was wrong and right. Not only

children

could understand more but

also

create a closer distance between parent and child or between professor and pupils. In conclusion,

punishment

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the punishment

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could educate

children

more faster and effectively.

However

, using

punishment

too much can harm effect on the both physical and mental health of

children

.

Furthermore

, some solutions

such

as listening to

children

’s views and analyzing between right and wrong.