In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?

Housing is one of the critical
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in
people
's life. In
the
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some
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territories, buying a
house
for living is more
advantegous
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advantageous
than renting that
house
. Despite the fact that there are both positive and negative effects, I believe owning a
house
has a positive impact on
household
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.
Firstly
, renting is only
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short-term solution for
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the family
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family
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families
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. As far as housing is affordable,
people
would
invested
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invest
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in
this
area because of the increased inflation rate
of
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all around the world.
Furthermore
,
people
may feel restricted
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they
doing
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in their houses by their landlords. It is true that
,
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owning your own
property
brings freedom to owners.
For instance
, in the UK
people
need to have
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permisson
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permission
to change their own wall
colors
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from the landlord.
On the other hand
, these problems slightly decrease
overall
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happiness of the family.
Secondly
, buying a
house
is an excellent investment area. If
household's
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total income is enough to
owning
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a
property
that can increase their wealth over time.
According to
research, housing prices in the USA increased significantly
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time and
expected
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to be the best investment method in the future.
Moreover
, it is undeniable that these factors lead
people
to
buying
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a
house
than renting one. In my point of view,
people
should consider owning their
property'
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property
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if the prices are affordable. In conclusion, many families strictly prefer to own their
house
than
renting
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rent
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a
house
.
In addition
, I
also
belive
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believe
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that
this
action is reasonable and
people
should consider owning a
property
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • ownership
  • renting
  • importance
  • sense of security
  • stability
  • financial investment
  • asset
  • customize
  • decorate
  • belonging
  • community
  • potential
  • future generations
  • long-term
  • cost advantage
  • control
  • living space
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