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Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to or work in a foregin country. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

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In
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 day and age, learning a foreign
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 can be instrumental in our life. Some
people
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, including me, believe that travelling and working in a foreign country are the only reasons for learning another
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. Some others claim that there are other reasons for
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.
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 with, learning a foreign
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 can enhance the
travel
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 experience, because if
people
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 are able to speak the
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 of the country they
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 to , they can communicate with locals effectively, which can avoid misunderstanding.
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,
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 leads to an enjoyable and memorable
travel
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 experience.
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, learning a new
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 gives a chance to
people
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 to navigate unfamiliar surroundings, order food, and get around the city easily.
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,
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 can provide a competitive edge in
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’s careers, as many companies, especially in the fields of tourism, business, and marketing, are looking for employees who are bilingual or multilingual, because they can easily communicate with their colleagues or clients, which can bring some profits for the companies.
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, picking up a non-native
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 can be a good way to exercise the brain, because it can boost some skills and abilities,
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 as cognitive abilities, solve-problem skills, and memory concentration.
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, some doctors offer their elderly patients acquire a second
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 as a method for preventing or at least postponing Alzheimer’s disease.
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, knowing a foreign
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 can improve
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’s knowledge, because they can read many foreign books, which are a valuable source of information and are not written in their first languages.
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, all of these benefits can be acquired through alternative activities or games, which can help boost memory, like solving puzzles.
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,
people
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 can use many translator websites or applications to translate any books into their mother tongue. In conclusion, I believe that
people
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 should learn a foreign
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 ,in order to work or
travel
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 abroad because it can enrich the
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travel
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 experience, and
also
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 it provides better job opportunities. Anyone who studies a second
language
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 for exercising their brain or accessing foreign information can use other activities or translator applications.
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