the bar chart below show the diffent level of men and women in Australia in 1999
The bar chart provided reveals the proportion of Australian males and females who held the qualifications in terms of different educational levels in 1999.
Overall
, the majority of females got a skilled vocational diploma compared to the least of men. In terms of men, the highest percentage was showed
in the undergraduate degree. Wrong verb form
shown
Furthermore
, the number of women who acquired high degrees(graduate and master's degree) were larger than their counterpart.
It is clear that
the rate of women with a skilled vocational diploma was by far the highest, at over 90%, which was nine times higher than their counterparts(only around 10%). Another apparent feature for females, was 70% of the post-degree degree, compared to 30% of males, almost rising by a half per cent.
However
, in terms of undergraduates, the figure for men(above 70%) experienced twice higher as their counterparts(35%). By contrast
, the comparison of the two genders with bachelor's degrees was not significant, with xx% and xx% respectively.Submitted by zjlslqls on
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