There is a problem with the changing rooms in the sports centre that you visit. You have complained several times but with no success. Write a letter to the manager of the sports centre. In your letter: • describe what the problem with the changing rooms is • say what happened the last times you complained • explain what you want the manager to do.

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing in order to complain about the changing rooms in Sadaf Center. I am Mah Ka working out in

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gym on a regular basis. Since I

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started to work out in

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complex, the door of the changing room

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been broken.

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, most customers suffer from

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problem on a regular basis.

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I complained several times about

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problem to

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, I could not receive a suitable answer. The

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time I complained about

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problem to your staff, the supervisor came and wrote the details about the door.

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she promised to repair

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a timely manner, but

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it has not been repaired yet. To rectify

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situation, I demand that you repair

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door.

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, in my idea, monitoring staff activities is essential to your complex. I suggest setting up a box for

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at the public hall. I hope

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matter will be dealt with you as soon as possible. Yours faithfully, Mah Ka

kargar.mh1992Mon May 27 2024

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task achievement

Consider providing more specific details about the issues with the changing rooms. For instance, mention how the broken door impacts users and their experience at the sports center.

coherence cohesion

Be mindful of minor grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. For example, 'the door of the changing room had been broken' could be revised to 'the changing room door has been broken.'

coherence cohesion

You have structured your letter well, using separate paragraphs for each point you wanted to cover, which makes it clear and easy to follow.

task achievement

The tone of your letter is appropriate for addressing a manager; it is respectful and constructive.

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

171 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

frequent user
specific issues
cleanliness
hygiene
broken facilities
lack of supplies
address the issue
response
emphasize
well-maintained
comfort
hygiene
politely
firmly
request
resolve
prompt resolution
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