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Nowadays most big cities have high congestion and road traffic issues. What are the real causes for this? Suggest a solution that will help to relieve it.

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These days exist an
increase
 in
congestion
 in the biggest
cities
.
This
 essay will discuss why are causes of
this
 high
congestion
such
 as
people
 have more access to get a
car
 and the reduced
use
 of public
transport
 by the population.
Therefore
, will review the possible solutions like having more
use
 of public
transport
.
To begin
 with, the main causes of
this
 issue are the increasing number of
people
 getting a
car
 and the less
use
 of public
transport
 which can develop road problems. To explain
this
 in more detail
car
 prices had been reduced over the years making it more accessible for everyone to get a
car
.On the other side,
this
 makes
people
 not
use
 much public
transport
.
For instance
,
a
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country like New Zealand only 40% of the population
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uses
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use
 public
transport
.
This
 is related to the economic process of
cars
. One of the solutions to
this
 matter is to promote the
use
 of public
transport
 by the government.
This
 can be happening by reducing the
price
 fare and increasing the number of buses around the biggest
cities
.
For example
, in the UK to ,get
people
 to
use
 more buses the government have reduced the
price
 to 30% per cent of the total
price
. The other way to reduce
congestion
 is to
increase
 taxes on the
price
 of
cars
 in larges
cities
.For
this
Add a comma
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 you will have fewer
people
 buying
cars
 per year.
For example
, the Netherlands
increase
 the taxes on a
car
 in the big
cities
 by 10%
last
 year and they have seen a reduction in the number of
people
 trying to buy a
car
this
 year. In conclusion, the
increase
 in
congestion
 is becoming a problem in big
cities
. The main cause of
that is
 more affordable to buy a
car
 and the decrease of
use
 public
transport
. The solution is in the government's hands which should implement ways for
people
 to
use
 more public
transport
 and
increase
 the taxes on
cars
.
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