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Nowadays most big cities have high congestion and road traffic issues. What are the real causes for this? Suggest a solution that will help to relieve it.

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These days exist an
increase
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 in
congestion
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 in the biggest
cities
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.
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 essay will discuss why are causes of
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 high
congestion
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such
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 as
people
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 have more access to get a
car
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 and the reduced
use
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 of public
transport
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 by the population.
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, will review the possible solutions like having more
use
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 of public
transport
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.
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 with, the main causes of
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 issue are the increasing number of
people
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 getting a
car
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 and the less
use
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 of public
transport
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 which can develop road problems. To explain
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 in more detail
car
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 prices had been reduced over the years making it more accessible for everyone to get a
car
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.On the other side,
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 makes
people
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 not
use
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 much public
transport
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.
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,
a
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country like New Zealand only 40% of the population
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uses
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use
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 public
transport
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.
This
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 is related to the economic process of
cars
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. One of the solutions to
this
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 matter is to promote the
use
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 of public
transport
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 by the government.
This
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 can be happening by reducing the
price
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 fare and increasing the number of buses around the biggest
cities
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.
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, in the UK to ,get
people
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 to
use
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 more buses the government have reduced the
price
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 to 30% per cent of the total
price
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. The other way to reduce
congestion
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 is to
increase
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 taxes on the
price
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 of
cars
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 in larges
cities
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.For
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this
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 you will have fewer
people
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 buying
cars
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 per year.
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, the Netherlands
increase
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 the taxes on a
car
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 in the big
cities
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 by 10%
last
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 year and they have seen a reduction in the number of
people
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 trying to buy a
car
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this
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 year. In conclusion, the
increase
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 in
congestion
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 is becoming a problem in big
cities
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. The main cause of
that is
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 more affordable to buy a
car
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 and the decrease of
use
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 public
transport
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. The solution is in the government's hands which should implement ways for
people
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 to
use
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 more public
transport
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 and
increase
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 the taxes on
cars
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.
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