The graph below shows the number of overseas visitors to three different areas in a European country between 1987 and 2007

The graph below shows the number of overseas visitors to three different areas in a European country between 1987 and 2007
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The line graph illustrates the statistics of international tourists in three different places in European countries from 1987 until 2007.
Overall
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, there is a rapid increase in of traveller who visited the coast starting 1992 till the
last
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year,
as well as
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those visits to the mountain shows a constant increase over time, wherein tourism in the lakes is very low and made dramatic fluctuations in the
last
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few years.
Furthermore
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, lakes are unlikely to be visited in 1987 with only 10,000 people,
moreover
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,
its
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their
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rise to a peak of 75,000 in 2002 and fall sharply to 50,00 in the
last
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year.
Whereas
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the coast is the most visited area since 1987 with 40,000 international visitors though it slightly fell in 1992,
however
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, it shows a continuous rise up to 75,000 until 2007. The number of mountains with 20,000 visitors in 1987 increased slightly until 2002. It is shown that most tourist prefers to visit the coast and lakes over a period of time.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "last".
Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "fall" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "rise" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • overseas visitors
  • number of
  • areas
  • European country
  • between
  • 1987 and 2000
  • graph
  • introduce
  • overview
  • trends
  • describe
  • analyze
  • compare and contrast
  • summarize
  • main findings
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