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Many people today are worried about the large quantities of waste produced by ordinary households. What problems are caused by household waste, and what solutions may be possible in both the short and the long term?

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These days , most
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 are extremely concerned about the huge number of domestic waste products from the average group . In
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 of the major causes of increasing the waste of items is the lack of awareness about cycling processes . some
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 of spreading their rubbish prefer to throw it,which not only creates a lot of pollution but
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 transfers the land of the city . let's consider a city like
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 as an example , by having
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 really wants to be there and gradually becomes a place to expand a lot of diseases.
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 the advancement of technology
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 tend to have an easy lifestyle and
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 by saving their time can invest in more productive and profitable things
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 of recycling .
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 of the most practical solutions is government intervention is critical . By implementing robust and strict laws,
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 notice that all of their actions are controlling so they never do anything to get them in trouble .
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, with the help of technology, we can strongly foster the awareness of our residents . by sharing the positive and negative aspects of it we can encourage them to reduce the quantity of their waste products . In conclusion, wasting products , especially the domestic is
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 of the biggest challenges for us which is related to a lack of information and a modern lifestyle that can be addressed by actively engaging of government and combining it with technology .

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coherence cohesion
Ensure that each paragraph has a clear main idea and that supporting points follow each other logically. This will enhance the coherence and cohesion of your essay.
task achievement
Expand on examples, making them more specific and clearly linked to the main ideas to enhance your task response score.
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Consider the opposing viewpoints or counter-arguments to demonstrate a more comprehensive understanding of the topic.
coherence cohesion
Your essay has a clear introduction and conclusion, which effectively frame your response.
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The essay addresses both the causes and solutions of household waste effectively.
coherence cohesion
Good use of transition words, which helps maintain smooth flow between ideas.

Your opinion

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Don’t leave your opinion until the conclusion.

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...do you agree or disagree?...do you think...?...your opinion...?

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Waste management
  • Sustainable packaging
  • Environmental pollution
  • Overflowing landfills
  • Recycling efforts
  • Waste segregation
  • Composting
  • Biodegradable
  • Waste-to-energy
  • Public awareness
  • Single-use plastics
  • Renewable resources
  • Toxic emissions
  • Environmental sustainability
  • Resource conservation
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