Some people believe that it is the best to accept a bad situation,such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discusss both these views and give your own opinion.
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the experience
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On the other hand
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For example
, in the Uk , most of its notion is more intelilgents
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it is quintessential to live more well-being of life
.
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