Some countries achieve international sports by building specialised facilities to train top athletes, instead of providing sports facilities that everyone can use. Do you think this is positive or negative development? Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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take care of the top athletes by building specialised clubs or training areas to train them.

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may be true,

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wrong because not everyone can use them. I believe that these

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should be more concerned about all the

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not only the professional athletes.

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with, athletes' training is quite important since they represent their country internationally.

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, the government should pay more attention to

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normal people. To put it differently, if they allow them to use the

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facilities, that would improve their skills in a specific sport

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them to know what they are interested in.

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, ordinary people will get the chance to contribute to the image of the country.

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, playing

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or doing different activities

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have a major role in keeping our bodies healthier and fit.

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, having a healthy generation surely has a positive impact on the

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as their economy.

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nations may avoid paying for

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medical issues like obesity or diabetes. That's why it is essential to realize that doing

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are very effective, so at the present time, supporting individuals to do them should be one of the top

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' priorities.

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, considering all the causes and consequences, having a special service for

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is a successful step, but allowing all the nationals to use is more functional.