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Many young people are leaving their home in rural area to study or work in cities. What are the reasons? Do the advantages of this development outweigh its disadvantages?

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In
this
 contemporary world, many youngsters are migrating to the metropolis from the countryside
areas
 and it could be because of the excellent education and other services. I believe that
this
 trend held a lot of benefits than drawbacks. I will elaborate on my viewpoints with examples and a conclusion regarding the given statement. First and foremost, metropolitan cities provide different kinds of
facilities
 to the young ones owing to
this
, many young people are moving to the urban
areas
 as they can get excellent educational
facilities
 there
as well as
 they can complete their highest degrees with the help of intelligent professors but small towns do not have too many colleges or universities and
also
, countryside colleges cannot offer the technological services for the pupils.
Moreover
, adolescents can get jobs in the megapolis because cities have large companies and those organizations can provide work to the younger generation dint to
this
, they can earn a handsome salary and they can enjoy a sedentary lifestyle.
For example
, some educational institutions are located in large cosmopolis and after completing studies, they offer placements to their learners
as well as
 they
also
 help to seek jobs in megacities.
On the other hand
, there could be some drawbacks to
this
 craze.
Firstly
, urban
areas
 are not tranquil places as they have more traffic, pollution and population
due to
this
, it is very complex to discover
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area
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 to study but townlets are very quiet and juveniles can focus on their courses. Another benefit is that if teenagers will continue their studies in the villages
then
 they can develop their rural
areas
 very quickly and
also
, people can get all the
facilities
 in their suburbs. To recapitulate, I think that the young generation should do their studies in the rural
areas
 so they can develop their villages and nobody would need to go to urban
areas
 to get all the
facilities
.
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