You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic. Some people think living in big cities is bad for people’s health. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words.
It is commonly argued that living in big
cities
is bad for people
's health
and we cannot avoid the negative impacts that outweigh the positive's ones.I strongly believe that living in urban areas and big cities
is crucial due to
the cost of living although
countries from rural areas and the countryside ,hence
, certainly aimed to enhance the quality of their life .While
some of them ignored the impact on their health
.In this
essay ,I will explain both of these points of view.
First of all , these days the number of individuals that live in huge cities
certainly in the developed and industrial zones are facing a serious problem related to their health
and well-being in order to ameliorate their lifestyle but also
they search for job opportunities .For instance
, traditional activities in farming need fewer workers than in the last
decades.That is
clear that living in the cities
can be extremely stressful and difficult.While
,
It is not easy to avoid the negative effect too.
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Furthermore
, they are problems such
as traffic congestion and pollution .For example
, people
in big cities
breathe a huge quantity of air pollution that affect badly their lungs and respiratory.In addition
,poverty is common in the city due to
the higher cost of living ,especially housing which can lead to reducing the lifespan and health
of people
.While
,
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people
argued that cities
lack a sense of community .
In conclusion ,There are different viewpoints held on this
issue , I believe that living in colossal cities
is harmful mostly to our health
and steps need to be taken to tackle this
problem .In my personal opinion, I disagree with this
view of point because our health
not depends only on the area of living but there are also
other
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