The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities.
The maps give information about rebuilding an island for visitor amenities.
The two main changes in the
map
are the pier and restaurant
.
The first Correct article usage
the restaurant
map
is totally empty with no building and
pathway; Correct word choice
or
however
, there are a lot of palm trees and the majority of them are in
the east side of the Change preposition
on
map
. Also
, in the west, there is a beach.
The second map
has a lot to say. First and for most
is the pier which is added to bring Correct your spelling
foremost
tourist
Fix the agreement mistake
tourists
with
Change preposition
by
boat
and Fix the agreement mistake
boats
it
is an entrance to Correct pronoun usage
apply
island
. Add an article
the island
Moreover
, there are
a lot of Change the verb form
is
way
which are created to get people where they want. Going forward to the north from Change to a plural noun
ways
pier
, there is a reception which is surrounded by a path and at the top of Add an article
the pier
map
, the restaurant is located. Add an article
the map
a map
Furthermore
, two accommodation areas are constructed and there are situated at
the right and left side Change preposition
on
if
the reception. The Correct your spelling
of
last
change is about swimming
area, Correct article usage
the swimming
locating
Wrong verb form
located
at
the Change preposition
on
north-west
side of the Correct your spelling
northwest
map
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Vocabulary: Replace the words map with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 7 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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