The diagram below shows the manufacturing process for making sugar from sugar cane. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The chart provides information about how to transform sugar cane into sugar.
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, it can be clearly seen that in order to change canes into seasoning take a lot of time and equipment; Linking Words
moreover
, some steps require professional skills.
A closer look at the diagram reveals that the process starts with growing the cane which may take about 12 to 18 months; Linking Words
next,
the ingredients will be harvested by the farmers; not only by hand but Linking Words
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by machine.
After that, the crushing process will begin and turns the ingredients into juice; Linking Words
furthermore
, it will be filtered by the limestone filter to purify it. Linking Words
Then
, the farmers use heat to evaporate the air and change the juice into syrup. Linking Words
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, the centrifuge is Linking Words
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an important part; if we skip Linking Words
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step, there will still have some crystals remaining in the syrup. The Linking Words
last
part is to dry and cool the syrup, so it will change into sugar and be ready for usage.Linking Words
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