The bar chart shows the percentage of the total world population in 4 countries in 1950 and 2002, and projections for 2050.

The bar chart shows the percentage of the total world population in 4 countries in 1950 and 2002, and projections for 2050.
The diagram illustrates the
proportion
of the total
world
population
in four different countries:
India
, China, the USA, and Japan over a 50-year period starting in 1950 and predicted figures for 2050.
Overall
, the most initial impression from the chart is the statistics for the
proportion
of the
world
population
decreased for all countries except
India
.
Also
,
India
is the only country that has increased the
proportion
of the
world
population
by 2050. In 1950 and 2002, the
proportion
of the
world
population
in China was the lion's share in all of the figures from approximately 23% to 20%.
Similarly
, the USA and Japan
also
have a fluctuating decline of around 2% over the same period, accounting for 5% and 2.5% respectively in 2002.
In contrast
, the opposite could be seen in
India
where the figure increased by approximately 15% to 17% in 2002.
On the other hand
, in 2050, as can be
seen
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that the figure for China and Japan continue to drop around 15% and 2% respectively,
while
the category of USA is likely to remain unchanged, at 5%.
Furthermore
,
India
's percentage of the total
world
population
is projected to continue rising to nearly 19% in 2050.
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  • bar chart
  • percentage
  • total world population
  • countries
  • 1950
  • 2003
  • projections
  • 2050
  • comparison
  • trend
  • increase
  • decrease
  • stable
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