Some people say that students who achieve the highest scores in their exams should be rewarded. Other say that whose show progress should be rewarded instead. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Although
it is sometimes thought that rewarding ought to that
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that student
those students
students
who get top marks in the school
exams, other people believe that the focus should be on what they progress. In my opinion, I consider that high scores students
have better career options in the future life.
On the one hand, some people think that children, who get highest
marks in Correct article usage
the highest
the
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school
exams, should be rewarded and I agree. In other words
, those children are concentrate
on all Change the verb form
are concentrating
are concentrated
subjects
when exams take by school
. Add an article
the school
Moreover
, they are more thinkable towards all directions of topics. For example
, students
prepare subjects
like math, history, physics, and biology and they have curious about all the subjects
. Additionally
, they can also
think all
the different topics in their mind. Change preposition
of all
Furthermore
, these students
have more choices to select their career because they have knowledge of all subjects
.
On the other hand
, it is often believed that it is better if the rewarding
at Replace the word
reward
school
for
those Change preposition
apply
students
who show progress. In other words
, those students
are only capable of doing well in certain subjects
. Therefore
, they are more thinkable towards only one topic. For example
, some younger students
like only math’s
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math
subject
and they do many Fix the agreement mistake
subjects
experiment
in that subject and got Change to a plural noun
experiments
well
progress in it. Change the adverb
good
Another
reasons are that they got Replace the adjective
Other
well paid
job Add a hyphen
well-paid
in
particular
industry in which they have interested.
In conclusion, Add an article
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while
people may vary in their opinions, I think that children have better
chance to succeed both in Add an article
a better
school
and later in life if they are got highest
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the highest
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